Novel
I read through the first seven sections yesterday.
Some good stuff in it. Two passages that bug me, though.
One gives some background on the main character, but I think it spends too much time doing so. I need to cut out that section, move it, reduce it, something.
The other section is kind of graphic. Appropriate for a secular horror novel - maybe even tame - but if I aim to create a Christian/Catholic horror novel, I don't know if this fits. At the same time, it gives some explanation for one of the "monsters," humanizing him.
Hmm. More reading today.
Some good stuff in it. Two passages that bug me, though.
One gives some background on the main character, but I think it spends too much time doing so. I need to cut out that section, move it, reduce it, something.
The other section is kind of graphic. Appropriate for a secular horror novel - maybe even tame - but if I aim to create a Christian/Catholic horror novel, I don't know if this fits. At the same time, it gives some explanation for one of the "monsters," humanizing him.
Hmm. More reading today.
posted by A Secular Franciscan | 5:50 AM
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